Hello Asaad! I think that your project would be very awesome, even if it wasn´t finished in time. Also, your project has covered all the criteria, all the way from Investigation to Creation. For further improvements, it is very important that you keep your blog posts in more detail (around 40-50 words) also, try to keep it more organized e.g. instead of writing ^Reflection 15^, try to put some headings e.g. ^Creation – Reflection^- However, it was a really cool and awesome project, keep up the good work! /Oskar
Hi oskar,how are you,hope you have good day,I think your project and your ideas was very success and interesting and it can be awesome as well.and cover all of the criteria ,The investigation and your creation was interesting and successful .For improvements might you can improve your reflection and put more detail to make it much better.and might can put ome more reflection but however your project was really awesome
Hello Asaad, Your project for the tech fair looks great. I was amazed when you showed the video of the robot that you were working on. For your blog I think that you should maybe change the background because your blog looks too plain. Also I think that your blog is perfect except that maybe you can change the way you write the titles because your titles for each tasks looks too complicated. It looks like you come on your blog and compose a post every time you come to IT. Your blog looks awesome. Chong
Hi Asaad, Your Tech fair project was great. It was surprising as you had created something "outside the box" and it looked attractive and seemed as if you put a lot of effort into it but also to mention that the headings on your blog may need another title as they were named using numbers. You can change those into reflections and give them a specific title to make it easier for the audience to read, and good title for your blog as it suits the topic well.The overall was great. Haniya
Hello Asaad!
ReplyDeleteI think that your project would be very awesome, even if it wasn´t finished in time. Also, your project has covered all the criteria, all the way from Investigation to Creation.
For further improvements, it is very important that you keep your blog posts in more detail (around 40-50 words) also, try to keep it more organized e.g. instead of writing ^Reflection 15^, try to put some headings e.g. ^Creation – Reflection^-
However, it was a really cool and awesome project, keep up the good work!
/Oskar
Hi oskar,how are you,hope you have good day,I think your project and your ideas was very success and interesting and it can be awesome as well.and cover all of the criteria ,The investigation and your creation was interesting and successful .For improvements might you can improve your reflection and put more detail to make it much better.and might can put ome more reflection but however your project was really awesome
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Hello Asaad,
ReplyDeleteYour project for the tech fair looks great. I was amazed when you showed the video of the robot that you were working on. For your blog I think that you should maybe change the background because your blog looks too plain. Also I think that your blog is perfect except that maybe you can change the way you write the titles because your titles for each tasks looks too complicated. It looks like you come on your blog and compose a post every time you come to IT. Your blog looks awesome.
Chong
Hi Asaad,
ReplyDeleteYour Tech fair project was great. It was surprising as you had created something "outside the box" and it looked attractive and seemed as if you put a lot of effort into it but also to mention that the headings on your blog may need another title as they were named using numbers. You can change those into reflections and give them a specific title to make it easier for the audience to read, and good title for your blog as it suits the topic well.The overall was great.
Haniya